All Comments on 'Prodigal Daughter'

Good story!

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So... In the end she is a slut?

so she is a whore for hire?

Then it wasn't at the end. 2 stars for the total loss...

I wound up loving this story! You made the backstory interesting and weaved in enough suspense about what was to come to keep me reading to the end. The only thing I would suggest is a more graphic description of the couplings, to please the "wham bam" readers.

Reads like it was free writing for a college creative writing class. Just too wordy.

This anonymous thoroughly enjoyed a well written story. The fact that the sentences were apparently too long is irrelevant.

I will follow advice and look out your other work.

A damn good read!

Your story was well told, well written and enjoyable.

To the other 'Anonymouses' - if all you have to do is count words, instead of reading content, then I suggest you go away and play Scrabble. Or produce well written erotica of your own. If, of course, you are able to write.

I love your stories and style. Grand Island and the sequel are two of my favorites. Thanks for sharing.

I liked the story all the same.

Some of your sentences are way too long. The first one with 87 words, others over 50.