by pinkpony2
The earlier stories were terrific but this one sucked.....the guy in the story had never so much as did oral on a guy, then he jumps right into gettin' ended? Very unrealistic without questioning a thing. Throwing the old girlfriend in just made it altogether too busy, plus first he's not to speak to preserve anonymity, then he's made to speak all over the place. Halfway through the story the artistry just seems to have been lost. It's disappointing, because the earlier stories in the series were of a very high quality, except for the typos.
This person is really a good writer. The last story was a little much at points, but this definitely seems to be one of the better writers out here. Too bad it's been so long since a new submission.
Nice femdom but then the stupid gay stuff. And how would a student know the professors ex-gf? And why would this ex-gf agree to such kinky shit?
You had us going to the very end(10 parts)that you d be adding more to this story and hopefully he would wise up and break free from the brat, but he heard the beeping of a clock and awaking realizing his clock battery was almost dead and that it was all a very bad dream . . .
You played us readers for the fools - how about a new story.