All Comments on 'Professor Lyons Needs Help'

by sleepingbeautybyday

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Boo!

Don't believe in stories where the dom slaps the female hard across the face, drawing blood and causing swelling. You have the ability to tell a good story so try leaving out the violence.

VikingboyVikingboyover 15 years ago
Helllo!

Very good story, well-premised. I hope the next chapter stands as well as this one.

texaskateytexaskateyover 15 years ago
yummy

Can't wait for the next chapter. Loved it -- every word.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
French Error

it's actually ma petite since petite is a feminine word & mon would be used for masculin words.

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