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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
LOVED IT

Not the usual professor x student I expected. Blew my mind. Can’t wait for more !! xx

Mobile49Mobile49over 3 years ago
Hot

Can’t wait for more of this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Can't wait to read a part 2, then 3, then...

I'm a sucker for teacher x student stories, but this one surprised me!

The only thing I'd point out is the POV change in the middle of the story (you switched from 1st person to 3rd), but other than that it's amazing!

Quaintgirl69Quaintgirl69over 3 years ago
More?

Hope there is more to this story

cot_dammit_elcot_dammit_elover 3 years ago
on the lookout 🕵🏻👀

Ugh seriously hope there is a few more chapters to come...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

The switch from first to third person was brutal.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
I definitely liked the dominant older lesbian aspects of this one!

Anytime a pretty younger woman is approached by an older lesbian woman, it's going to be hot. The only AWKWARD part of this particular story is that it opens with a first person narrative by a college girl waitress, but then finishes with a third-person story about a girl named Jess being approached & molested by two lesbian women in a bathroom. That was confusing, to say the least!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
First person please

There are enough comments about your sudden irritating switch from first person to third, however, I personally enjoyed the first person more. I hope future chapters will be that ...

Funewriter1Funewriter1over 3 years ago
Excellent Chapter One

A thoroughly enjoyable beginning to what I hope will be a multi-chapter story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Hot, very realistic, well-written, obviously by a lez.

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