by Nercited
Not the usual professor x student I expected. Blew my mind. Can’t wait for more !! xx
Can't wait to read a part 2, then 3, then...
I'm a sucker for teacher x student stories, but this one surprised me!
The only thing I'd point out is the POV change in the middle of the story (you switched from 1st person to 3rd), but other than that it's amazing!
Ugh seriously hope there is a few more chapters to come...
Anytime a pretty younger woman is approached by an older lesbian woman, it's going to be hot. The only AWKWARD part of this particular story is that it opens with a first person narrative by a college girl waitress, but then finishes with a third-person story about a girl named Jess being approached & molested by two lesbian women in a bathroom. That was confusing, to say the least!
There are enough comments about your sudden irritating switch from first person to third, however, I personally enjoyed the first person more. I hope future chapters will be that ...
A thoroughly enjoyable beginning to what I hope will be a multi-chapter story.