All Comments on 'Prom Night Ch. 04'

by SWhite1982

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Captivating!

A captivating story, realistically written. You have great writing skills.

Please keep up the good work.

Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Yay! Happy to read the continuation of the story!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Please continue!

I do think the ache both Dom and James feel for each other is a real love beginning to emerge. I love their physical descriptions -- James is a sexual gift, with the cock, the hairy chest, abs, pubes, etc -- a real catch of a man in my opinion. I like the traces of beautiful black chest hair showing at the open neck of his dress shirt! And Dom is en up-and-coming sexual being too. Please find a way to get them together on a permanent basis, and send Caroline away. I love these two guys!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
MORE

PLEASE. MOREEEE. This reminds me of a similar experience I had and want to see how it finishes for them

SWhite1982SWhite1982almost 4 years agoAuthor

Thank you, all, so much! I truly appreciate the support and the kind words. Still working on Chapter 5, but I triple promise I will submit it soon!

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