All Comments on 'Proposal to Twins'

An amuse-bouche to start the day. Thanks!

Not up to your usual standards but still an enjoyable read. Keep 'em coming.

I expected nothing less! I am so very thankful that you share your impressive talents with us as you can. My only wish would have been a longer story - more to love, as it were.

Thanks again!

The story promised much but delivered little. Since this an erotica site I was looking forward to the myriad sexual couplings between all the main characters. Instead, we are left dangling....

Sounds like the marriages became group sex. 4 stars

Amusing. Rachel and the twins let them know who was boss. LOL

Glad to see you are still writing; I suppose longer tales are possibly more taxing and worrisome in that you want to make sure the story you start is one that's finished. Long live the king.

Thanks for sharing. All the best. 5* Slainté

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Very Sweet und Romantique!

11/10!!!!!