All Comments on 'Protected Pt. 04'

Great chapter!

5

Great chapter! I love Colt and Willow together. When her breasts are crushed against his muscular chest, I would hope he has a nice coating of chest hair to tickle those breasts. Colt just seems such a sexy, well-built, muscular "all man" guy, that I just think some chest hair would be an added turn on!

Best chapter so far! Great emotion description and big, positive change in direction for this Romance story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Great work so far. A modern-day Arthurian Lancelot tale, a tale that seems to have disturbing stretches where the hero is unarmed and unable to defend his heroine. Lancelot without his sword is just 'Lance'

I've thought of a reason for Willow being targeted. Her inheritance. That's all I am going to say about it.

Excellent.

Agree about the inheritance, my first thought when Aunt Pam's fella was mentioned. Let's find out if we're right.

Totally unrealistic........ lost me as a reader of this story......... There is no way the law inforcement is not involved. And the love scene is neither practical from a psychological standpoint for the main character Willow. Over done........ It's your story but come on....... this is neither viable in real life nor believable.

Its her program they're after.

Fantastic story.

I think Daddy did something and it was personal to someone in the Cartel. Whoever it is wants his daughters death for revenge. It is personal, very personal.

5/5

Sorta ok story. But, why not have at least a little fire power? Instead they (all of the security boys) spent the day with one finger in their nose and one in their butt waiting for someone to yell switch. I’m not criticizing the writing as much as the “security” mind set; the gang that couldn’t shoot straight? How about; the keystone cops? Overall; a comedy of errors.