All Comments on 'Protected Pt. 05'

Another good chapter!

5

What happens next?

Very good writing, but a little slow on the story.

1/2 part story and 9 1/2 parts sex out of 10 = the possibility of a 20 chapter story. Just saying ...

Romance is the most neglected genre on the site, so it is very special when a good romance story comes along. Protected is one of the rare, heart-warming romance stories that one can read over and over with great satisfaction. Five stars!

Good story so far, although the plot has slowed and the sex has sped up, inevitable I guess as it’s a romance after all. Looking forward to the plot getting going again though!

Another great chapter

5/5

I have been enjoying the story; however, this chapter seemed repetitious with the actual sex and dialogue. Look, I am not a writer. The chapter almost has a feeling of "Wait, I forgot the sex so lets do a (long) sex chapter now!" I do plan to follow the story because it is a great mystery.