All Comments on 'Protected Pt. 07'

Good chapter!

5

Some action at last. I was afraid it might be one long fuck fest…….

Well that was intense! Great story, keep going!!!

Very well done! 5*

I am really enjoying the story. I really appreciate how fast you are posting the chapters. I have guess who is responsible, I think it’s a character that has only been mentioned but I never get these right. I look forward to reading the next chapter. Thanks

I'm hanging on every chapter. Good work, keep it coming.

The plot has definitely wound up now, great chapter, plenty of action and tension, many thanks for posting chapters this quickly, really adds to the reading experience knowing they’re out there written and ready to go! Cheers Ppfzz.

Loving this whole story keep it going

Better than Columbo....I reckon it's Aunties b.f.

That was an intense chapter. 5/5

I'm a bit torn : on the one hand, the story really has everything a good one needs, and it's also extremely well told. On the other hand, it's based on a plot that is also extremely improbable, because Colt's behavior is anything but "safe" for his protégé.

Common sense tells you that the first rule in the event of a threat is not to do anything "as usual", but to be as different as possible in order to be less predictable and to avoid places where you can be expected. Colt does none of this, on the contrary. This may be good for the story, but it damages its credibility.

That's why I don't really know how to rate this story: 5/5 stars for the way it's told, but at best 2-3 stars (so far) for the plot - sorry ! 🤷🏽

All the more I'm looking forward to the last chapters ! 😊

{Common sense tells you that the first rule in the event of a threat is not to do anything "as usual", but to be as different as possible in order to be less predictable and to avoid places where you can be expected. Colt does none of this, on the contrary. This may be good for the story, but it damages its credibility.}

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Valid points... however you answered your own question as to 'why.' It services the story. If some poor decisions weren't made, the story would have ended in Part 1.

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Having said that, I tried to make it plausible by 1) making the magnitude of the threat uncertain in the beginning and 2) making Winter a strong woman unwilling abandon her life and what she thought was important.