All Comments on 'Protection from a Bully'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
so hot..

I hope you write more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Loved it!

This was very well paced and believe me. Most people don't know just how many of us are just waiting for an excuse like this! ;)

Kacey

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Hope we see more of this

The situation felt realistic without being over detailed and the sex was non-consensual without being flat out rape. Perfect story for me

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

part two please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
good story

This would be worth a part 2 but as long as it doesnt get unrealistically silly like most of these stories do. Lets see the mom pick up the son giving an opportunity to see how hot the mom is, then he eventually rapes her at home when the protector is not there. Then the protector can eventually avenge her in part 3 and fuck her as his reward.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
I gave it five stars.

Please keep the story going. Your writing style is a good match for my reading preference.

Crusader235Crusader235almost 5 years ago
Good

Really good start. MILF needs help from him, he scores her in the deal. Now how will he deal with crazy Mark? And will she need much more of Jason because her husband is gone so much. You got a couple more chapters in ya? Five stars!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Damn.

A really hot start. What about the bully? The ending was way too abrupt. This story needs a good finish. Can't wait for chapter two.

MrBondsMrBondsabout 4 years ago
Hot

Well written and erotic. I enjoyed Pam's initial reluctance. I wish she had been more resistant and been spanked or degraded during sex.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Waiting for part 2

shadrachtshadrachtover 1 year ago

This was on the verge of being truly great. But it ended far too soon, and there was no continuation.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Time to finish this wonderful story.

This story needs a deserving ending.

lonerider10lonerider1010 months ago

Please continue this story period it is awesome and quite a turn on.

Anonymous
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