by Sexybeast8899
This was very well paced and believe me. Most people don't know just how many of us are just waiting for an excuse like this! ;)
Kacey
The situation felt realistic without being over detailed and the sex was non-consensual without being flat out rape. Perfect story for me
This would be worth a part 2 but as long as it doesnt get unrealistically silly like most of these stories do. Lets see the mom pick up the son giving an opportunity to see how hot the mom is, then he eventually rapes her at home when the protector is not there. Then the protector can eventually avenge her in part 3 and fuck her as his reward.
Please keep the story going. Your writing style is a good match for my reading preference.
Really good start. MILF needs help from him, he scores her in the deal. Now how will he deal with crazy Mark? And will she need much more of Jason because her husband is gone so much. You got a couple more chapters in ya? Five stars!
A really hot start. What about the bully? The ending was way too abrupt. This story needs a good finish. Can't wait for chapter two.
Well written and erotic. I enjoyed Pam's initial reluctance. I wish she had been more resistant and been spanked or degraded during sex.
This was on the verge of being truly great. But it ended far too soon, and there was no continuation.