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Rachel's face slowly broadened with a sultry smile as her tongue flicked out to wet her lips. "So, a good fuck it is then."
"No," I corrected her gently. "I want you to get some sleep. You're dead on your feet. There will be time enough for me to fuck you as much as I want."
For the second time in the last 24 hours I watched her deflate. At least this time it was in relief instead of fear.
"What am I going to do with you, Rachel," I wondered rhetorically as I tucked her in beneath my covers. "I've made a fucking mess of everything."
"Not yet, Master..." She mumbled as she quickly sank into sleep. "I'll take care of it. I won't let anything bad..."
"Really?" I asked what I assumed was her now comatose form. "Maggie hates me. What's her name- Desirae? She's could be a loose cannon. Not to mention whoever else you've told. Fuck, or whoever Maggie might have told." Of course, I was only just beginning to realize how sloppy I had been.
"I'll handle... Dez." Rachel mumbled softly. "Maggie... needs time. Trust me..."
I sat there and just watched her slowly breathing for a bit. It dawned on me that this was the first time I had seen her sleep. For some surely twisted reason it felt... meaningful.
I know, I know. I just warped her mind into a sex slave ready and willing to do whatever depraved thing I could think of- and the first thing I do with her is... nothing. Shake your head at me if you want, but that's how it happened. I like to think it meant I hadn't completely fallen to the dark side yet. Just, you know... mostly.
- COMMENTS
Red8_2Playover 2 years agoI really like mind control stories and your is very good. I wish you were still writing. I have no idea if you stil log in the site here anymore. But if you do, thank you for the good read and the nice fantasy.
LupusDeiabout 4 years agoI fully well understand and expected the fit of anger, and a slave had to be made, but I hoped, for a moment too short, that it would be Desirae who will be dragged and put on the machine with force if necessary. Rachel... was up for behavior correction, sure. Well, let's see how for it's got, and how she will twist out of it.
Anonymousover 5 years agoMy problem with the mc ain't his lack of morals. It's all the self destroying lies he tells himself and his inability to control any part of his own mind. Truly one of the main chars i dislike the most from what I have read on this site. On the other hand I really liked the whore, very interesting to see their relationship. A bit unsure how she will be interesting now, is there even anything left?
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoI am absolutely loving this story. I must also say your quite the talented writer.
TheAvgJoealmost 7 years agoYes!! I'm tired of seeing people get people get powers like these and want to save the world instead of just not giving a fuck anymore and doing what they want. This is awesome!!
Please keep this going!!
Anonymousabout 7 years agoUnlike other commentators, I like seeing the main character succumb to the corruption of power. I think his fall in ethics is a natural one and also provides the conflict.
I enjoyed him wanting to keep Maggie true, but already second guessing what effects his efforts are causing.
I loved his angry treatment of Rachel. It was hot and showing his corruption winning out. I wish it was longer.
Looking forward to more.
laad4e08about 7 years agoI am very glad to have the story going again. Also Rachel is easily the most likable character in this series. So I don't mind him using her a little, but is was fun when she was still kind of her but "in on it". Of course a part of her was a little jealous, he should have seen that coming. But with him getting angry making her a slave and sort of taking away the rest of what she had left of her own personality really makes him unlikable so I get with the other commenters are saying or trying to say.
I really enjoy the mind control stories it always seems to be the mind controller wants to be liked or loved for who he is or to foster a relationship that would be natural but the pickle is always it is impossible once you've change somebody else's thought process through the main control .
OnyxShadowabout 7 years ago...was when after a moment of perceived rejection the MC's immediate reaction is to punish and enslave his lifelong friend who he is also supposedly in love with. The later rash decision to do what amounts to destroying Rachel was just cementing this bizarre change. This is upsetting because it takes a character who is mostly sympathetic and likable in the first four chapters and out of the blue makes him sort of a monster. I'm okay with a character who is fundamentally evil. I'm less interested in a character who half way into a story just massively changes without good reason.
