All Comments on 'Provence Pleasures'

more to follow?

The sister is complaining in one paragraph "this isn't right" and one paragraph later she is urging her bro to "stick it in Alice". You really need to think through and plan out the story line.

Way too short, confusing bunch of pure shit, is about the best description I can give it. You might want to rethink being a writer. Also, where was the incest???

no incest yet but clearly Karen is interested since she is confuesed about her feelings yet loves to see her friend getting fucked.Vicarious pleasure ?