All Comments on 'Pseudopod'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Interesting story but a lot of the same words being used quite a bit. Kept taking me out of the story. Not bad, though.

KSweetumsKSweetumsover 3 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the feedback

Thanks!

technoterritechnoterriover 3 years ago

Probably 60 years ago a similar but superficial story af and alien had sex with an earth women. I have a vague remembrance with a pseudopod penetrating a vagina of a female by a female SF&F writer. I believe it was my own imagination that added a second insertion orally It has been an occasional remembrance your stoy gave me the details and i imagine a complete penetration of the anus and re entering the vagina. Loved your story and wet myself Thanks for fulfilling an old dream

KSweetumsKSweetumsover 3 years agoAuthor
Squee!

Thanks for the kudo! There's a sequel: "My Ripening."

As for out the pucker and into the jayjay, sounds unsanitary without a full tentacle wash in between. Even the Masters have their limits. Plus, an egg would just not fit... realism!

AKajiraAKajiraabout 3 years ago

Nice to have alien sex that isn't with 7' tall ripped aliens with big dicks!!

This was surprisingly super hot. Now going to read #2

KSweetumsKSweetumsalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks for your comment! I hope you liked the sequel. My other sci fi short story Cacata also has sex that's considerably different from what would be experienced between humans.

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