All Comments on 'The Chronicles of Bobby Pt. 03'

very bloody hot story and hopefully more to cum.

Your first two stories were great. This one was great until you started adding outsiders. Please stop.

The storyline is going downhill and becoming not worth the read. Character development has become lost and not even worth being considered a stroke story at this point.

Have to agree with the other Anonymouses.

First two chapters were great, but this is going downhill fast.

Outragous portions, get real.

I liked the first two chapters but adding people outside the family is a deal breaker for me, as is the whole fatty love. Guess you'll have to move to some other (probably fetish9 category if it goes on like this.

2*

Are you serialscibber as well?

Well, I guess you answered my question from Chapter 2. Yeah, is is really that stupid Unfortunately, that, as usual, means the story is also that stupid.

dumbest shit I ever read, what a waste of time.

yeah going down real fast.... wake up man, wake up.

Please do not leave us hanging does Bobby impregnate Lisa tell us with he does and also does he impregnate the oldest Step sister a second time

When do you ever see a woman get pregnant from her step son all the while encouraging her own duaghters to fuck him and also get pregnant. Bobby is a complete fucking idiot, he doesnt mind making everyone pregnant but does he even care about them at all or about his children his making. Flipping useless story. Please Quit!

Would Lisa even survive the birth without her having a heart attack or stroke from being so over weight

Why did I read this shit? Because it was only short, 2500 words. But that's it; no more. Bye!

Still love the story. A lot. AAAAA++++