All Comments on 'Puanani's Popsicles'

I should clarify my author's note: it's not a good idea to put food items in bodily orifices except your mouth... You know... To eat. Forgot that a mouth is also a bodily orifice...🙈

Beautiful

And there better be a Part 2 to this one too! Holy WOW!

Where should I have the popsicle delivered?

Really, so well written. I'm not usually into lesbian sex, but you've made me a convert. In my next life, I may come back as a woman just for that popsicle.

I owe you a popsicle ;). When I see one of your pieces I always anticipate being entertained — how, who, where one never knows. This piece — erotic, yes, but so much more: place specific (Hawaii and the beach scene), believable characters, real dialogue, laughing out loud humor: “…school of popsicle-loving piranhas.” “Line in the sand; popsicle in a pussy.” Come on, not many can pull off this blend of humor and erotic fiction.

Sex on the beach is a sandy business and scratches more itches then you thought about to solve

And popsicles may truly damn cold placed in certain areas

But if the girls having fun, im not judging

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I loved your story. Very, very well-written. I wish I could write sentences with such a good flow and rhythm!

Incredibly well written, as always. Wonderful job once again, Jackie!

Will never think about popsicles the same way.

THANK YOU FOR THAT!!

Never opposed to adding sweetness to a popsicle I say.... DELICIOUS

Loved the natural flow of the story, the dialogue seemed perfectly natural. Hot scenario, made me want to try one of those popsicles, sliding right out....

Great story. Had me engaged from beginning to end.

Only a very good author will tempt me into reading a story that wouldn't normally attract me. This one definitely put the erotic into Literotica. Sexy, tense and wonderfully naughty. I loved it. *****

Tender, but just a tinge of S&M. What you write is hard to find. And you write it so well. I'm hooked.

A wonderful read. I'll think of this the next hot day I'm enjoing a 'lolly' (UK popsicle!)

Another good story!

You have a wonderful way of writing!

It seems I owe you AT LEAST ONE popsicle. :)

Thank you for the romp!

So hot! And alternately cool! :D time to go out and buy an ice dildo! Thanks for the inspiration. Great, engaging writing per usual!