All Comments on 'PuGs Suck!'

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jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenover 11 years ago
Loved it

Love a good fan fic, Part of me was thinking that the deeps were gunna cum-steal from the girls. Ghost-walking back just in time to save them xDD

Faithful_ShadowFaithful_Shadowover 11 years agoAuthor
We both know...

We both know that deeps never walk back.

They wait for the healer to finish getting screwed, and then get their rez.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good Story

Enjoyed the writing, could use a little more detail on the characters.

Other than it, it was fine.

Faithful_ShadowFaithful_Shadowover 11 years agoAuthor
More detail coming....

I agree about the lack of detail. I have several stories in the works and this was a short story involving on going characters from bigger story arcs. Haven't quite polished the others to an acceptable quality so I threw this one out as a testing ground to see what kind of reception I'd get. Aerynel and Shae'lyn will be back and given a lot more depth and description.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Level of Detail

Agreed on the detail matter. Still, can't wait to read your longer stuff;).

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

MORE, MORE CONTENT:DD

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Nice story

good writing, cant wait to read more

JessikaN135JessikaN135almost 11 years ago

Nice one! There can never be too much sexy stories in the WOW universe!

Feel free to read "The adventures of Lucy and Tharion" if you like. I would love to get some more feedback there, too. :)

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