All Comments on 'Pulling Him Closer'

Wonderful story!

5

Excellent!

5 stars, because I'm not allowed to give it more.

Always a good reading experience when one of your postings shows up on Literotica. Thanks. 5*

Stretching things a bit, but an excellent story

This is an excellent ending to the first story. 5 stars, and thank you!

Absolutely loved it. But then, all you’re stories are fantastic. I think this one is better than Pulling A Trigger. This one is definitely worthy of 5 stars.

Nice, redo, I love the Cameos, too

Great all over again

Thanks for writing

Reading this was like Deja Vu, but I still loved it. Wasn't hard to follow and went smoothly. Thanks.

WillDevo everytime I read one of your stories I realize how much I miss reading your stories. You are one of the few writers whose oeuvres I re-read. Todd172 is another one. You tell stories well and the world in general is much better for it. Thank you for your efforts and obviously, 5 *

To those taking time to read comments here's one for you: If you feel like you've read this "new" story before, it's probably because you have. It's not new. It was originally published back in June of 2022. Somehow, though, when we submitted a revision / update to it, the site moderator(s) deleted it and then rejected the edit. So, it had to be resubmitted. Every comment / rating was lost, and explains why it's marked as NEW.

To my way of thinking prequels shouldn't need you to read the 'set-up'.

JS from AA ;)

I don’t often re-read stories here, but I’m glad to see this one again. I always enjoy your work. The characters are likable and well developed, the writing is clean, easily readable, and well-edited, the settings are researchable and I’m able to visualize them. The details are well-researched. Most of all, it’s just a sweet story!

Thank you once again for writing, and thank you for sharing your work.

I've been a fan for a long time. But, deciding an LCP seems like it would be difficult. And I always put PPE on before loading the weapon.

Thanks ,

Bravo x2

I’m a big fan, yadda yadda. And I look forward to reading anything you post here. That said, I found Rick’s reaction to RJ’s mom’s bomb a bit off. It somehow seemed out of character and off-putting. It may well have been only me, so it’s probably not worth trying to be more specific. Overall, I enjoyed the story and the characters. Thanks!

You're prolog directed to read this prequel as well as the related story of the Carlson's. Wow!!. I could not put the tablet down until I completed all 5 episodes. Two completely amazing love stories. BRAVO.

You two are awesome. Thanks for this one! 5/5