by CommonSenseMedia
Normally, I wouldn't enjoy an MFM threesome. But there's something about how you wove everything together that made it wonderful. The closing line has me laughing my ass off.
Supposedly, the house is chock full of relatives. So it's pretty amazing that no one heard the commotion and showed up to check on them.
Definitely a 5/5 effort. Thanks!
Enjoy how they each had their own personalities but still loved each other in the end. Would like to see more!
Amazing word choice and flow although it could have used a couple more rereads due to broken English and small mistakes but overall great story 4/5