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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

And mom didn't freak when they said they had mental powers?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nicely done. Very hot. But where did the powers come from?

vanyevanyeover 1 year ago

When did Dad die?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Don't stop here! Keep going. You are a gifted writer! Encore! 10 Stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Don't stop here! Keep going. You are a gifted writer! Encore! 10 Stars.

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