All Comments on 'Pump Up The Fam Pt. 01'

Ok, one hopes you're going to explain the sudden transformation somehow :p

OMG, hot and so sexy. More please. surely you want to breed to whole family.

Yes! More muscle growth incest!

Excellent! Perfect. There were lots of different ways this could have gone (femdom, cuckold, etc), but this is probably my favorite as far as the direction of the story. The only way it could have been better for me is if Clive had remained normal sized but still somehow managed to bring his sister under his control, but that's just me liking size difference stuff.

Ill be watching for more of this one

I’m looking forward to him knocking up his incredibly rude mother, after making her beg for it.

Now, Is he gonna be smart enough to find out where the music came from, and what *else* it's been making them do?

Thank you, dearest readers, for the encouraging comments. More to come soon as the mystery deepens in part two!

You have labeled this story as IT. However it’s more of a fantasy. That stat “98 pound weakling “. Can go from that condition to be an Arnold S. In 4 hours is unbelievabl. I realize that the music is the instrument of change. I’ll read chapter 2 to see how rest of family react.