All Comments on 'Punching'

Wish it was longer, would love to read the aftermath

*sigh*

the storyline held a lot of promise

darn this 750-word sometimes.

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ great hook!! Great story!!

Damn straight, Skippy!

Very nice.

Good but a very short story like this is almost never going to get better than 4 stars from me. I know its difficult to write a coherent story in the "750 Word" format, but there is too much missing for it to be a wholly enjoyable read. So 4 stars but it really would be better if was quite a bit longer (I know you have the talent to do so).

Got out while the getting was good!

4

It's true. Men and women have very different values, but fidelity and respect both sexes share. She could be a 10 in looks, but disrespect drops her rating by a lot. Instant 6. But cheating drops you even lower. She's a 2 at best. He's a solid 7, I'd bet.

Good! Too short tho

Right premise, wrong style. This is a tale that can't be constrained to 750 words, swing and a miss.

As always, a great story that is different. Thank you!.

I liked it!

Worthy of a longer tale

Saved himself a lot of pain later! Good decision!

Nice little tale. Would love to have this all expanded.

Nice but too short. This has so much scope and can be so much fun when he does not arrive for the wedding.

Suspicion turns to confession. Aiden well it was obvious. Whew, close call. good job.

She dodged a bullet too. Wow, the groom is always an after thought in the plans because a wedding is about the bride. The fact that he was insecure? Really, the Princess here was Tom.

Not bad at all.

Suffers from the ills of all flash stories.

Excellent example of a 750 worder!

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5 *****

A nice 750 word story. 4 stars.

This has the bones of a good story, but I find it lacking. The 750 word challenge is called a challenge for a reason, and I think this one fell short of it.

Decent enough but really should have been longer. This was a great outline for the beginning of a story. Like he checks around and finds there are videos of all the girls kissing the strippers dick. Then more active play. And even her Mom who encouraged her gets caught up.. All of a sudden Daddy is not so happy. Treating his daughter (and his wife) in manner to they have been used to takes on a whole new meaning for him.

Short yes, but I liked it.

Nice little ditty. 750-word format prevented it from being better since the format prevents much information including how they met, courted, details on her family and Aiden and then, at the end, did he just not show up for the wedding or did he give her notice? One other cranky point for the purists, since he's NOT married, does this belong in Loving Wives? Probably not a good idea for another chapter but you might take the premise and write a longer, more complicated, story.

The author of the work I read immediately prior to this one couldn't achieve with two full pages what SD has done with just 750 words, which was to tell a story with a proper ending. I salute you, SD, four stars!

Rings a bell. Excellent.

For all of us who over marry, and we all over marry.

Smart Smart Man, Get the fuck out before she owns you. 5 Stars for sticking it to the bitch & her family.

That was one of the better 750 stories

Meh, good setup but without the fall out of him skipping the wedding the story falls flat.

Another story line with potential wasted

A very nice twist at the end.

at least someone stuck up for him

Well written story but would benefit from additional development, like what happened on the day of the wedding and the weeks/months that followed. The last conversation Tom had with Stephanie doesn’t give a clear “our relationship is over, I am dumping you”.

Nicely done for all the under appreciated spouses out there

Okay, I guess. Not much of a story though.

Well done

I never give these 750-word stories more than 3*. It's just not enough to tell a really good story properly. But I did give you 3*.

Had to round up to get there, 5*

Needs finished!

2* not because of a bad storyline, just didn't flow and seemed anorexic. Storyline has potential, just flesh it out a little more.

Well, it's a 750 word story, so the format is self-limiting.

But this really cries out for a substantially expanded version.

This short was perfect!

You overshot by 55 words so go ahead and finish this little masterpiece.

If 100% of you isn't enough for her then you might be over marrying, but you're definitely under thinking. Grow up, be yourself, marry the person that wants you to be who you are and who expects you to accept them in the same vein. It might actually work. Otherwise it almost never does. Thanks for the effort.

Not bad. This is for all the grooms who where stupid!

Four stars.

Good for a 750 word story, but there is still the fin when he leaves her at the altar and what happens next.

Wow good job! Short, but complete, to the point, and pleasant, and with a good moral.

A great 750 story about the madness of some weddings which turn into a circus. 5 stars and thanks for sharing. - it reminded me of another wedding many years ago when I worked for a large engineering company. One of the directors had a 22-year-old daughter who was engaged to a young engineer at the company. The wedding was huge, with an enormous budget, and planned with military precision. The ceremony went well and the ‘happy couple’ departed on an exotic honeymoon. Two weeks later they returned to announce their divorce. The bride then eloped with a 35-year-old married father of 3 who also worked for her father. The affair had bubbled away for a year but the bride didn’t have the courage to cancel the wedding preparations which had become an unstoppable circus. I will never forget the scandal and humiliation resulting from that wedding and I often wonder what happened to the ‘bride’ and her lover.

Zing!

Too short, need more development.

Maybe everything worth saying was said in those 750 words...

But not for me.

A proper intro and conclusion would have probably made this a 5⭐. Still an OK effort, though.

I love it! No further explanation or follow up isnecessay.

What a fortuitous cock sucking that was. It gave our hero the final nudge to avoid a terrible mistake.

How many on bachelors/ bachelorette parties are in some form of cheating? I know of many .guys have and so many stories of brides in Vegas , Atlantic City and a couple In Nashville which has become popular. Walked in a room and three friends were pounding away at a future bride and her maid of honor friend switching and high fiving. Many just wild dancing with a hand job or blow job. A fun crew fro Philly was in a wild fuck fest and three of the guys wound up at the girl’s wedding as date and friends of the family. What a kick in the balls for the unknowing husbands . Another well off friend would go to Vegas often with all the perks and his goal was a future bride or a married woman as a second shot which he claimed was 100% . He said his favorite was a bride whose hubby’s party was out there at the same time and they were to spend 4days after their three day separate parties. He had her come to his suite three nights . He did it all , any perverse thing you could think of and taking her anally over and over say he doubled dosed on viagra for three days . He said the morning she had to leave to meet future hubby he ass fucked her long and hard even while room service brought breakfast in he tried to get her to blow him but she wouldn’t. She sucked his fingers instead while he pounded her ass shooting load. The guy said awesome what a slut I feel bad for future hubby. She was embarrassed but while he ate she was blowing him a what little load he had left he put on her face. He knew where they were having dinner and paid to have a table right next to them interacting with them making like he was just a friendly guy and picked up there tab as a wedding gift. She was scared the whole time and when hubby went to bathroom he asked her to sneak off to bathroom, he left and followed her in woman’s room. In stall he put his dock in her mouth fucking her face not to completely and he played with her pussy for a few seconds and told her give hubby a big kiss when you get back to the table for a little taste of my cock which she did. He kept in touch through social . They are still married, two kids and she swears she never thought about cheating again . He tells her he’ll pop up on a family trip and do her again . She laughs but he is gonna try, lol

Another perfect example"Love" can make you stupid.

5 star.

Short and sweet. Stop the process now before the “bus” runs over you. ****

(me laughing) Y'know, that is so often the case.....................

I liked it.

So much better to avoid a mistake

than making it.

4 out of 5 from me.

Good he found out she was a cum dumpster before actually marrying her

Gave a Five because This is the Way !

A good story told. Short and sweet. No going back 10 years to justify shitty actions. No spouse has to start their married life as a 3rd wheel. A successful relationship is always give and take.

It's hard to write a good story in 750 words but you managed it here. Well done.

Good for him....would be nice to know whst happens Princess

Saved by the belle! If Sweetie doesn’t assume (‘make’ ass of you & me) what PreHubby was going to grinch about, PreHubby would be In a world of escalating (and expensive) hurt! Like the hen party was the next day from his grinch! Or, easier, Sweetie just lets him finish his sentence!

4*

Good start. Now, where's the rest of the story?

Oh I thought this was good, short but so to the point.

750 words is not really a story more lke waste of time author has writing talent I just need more of a story

I liked this one. Short and sweet and no wwwhhhhhhyyyyyyyyy?? Wwwwhhhhhhyyyyyyyyy??

You are a good writer.

Good short story. Thanks.

Last line got 5 stars from me. Good job.

To all those whining about 750 word stories, just don’t read them. To me, the 750 word challenges separate wheat from the chaff. Those with talent can convey so much in so few words. In this case; well done, Author.

Above your weight is in the eye of the beholder.

NICE tale. DMW aka

How desperate can the dick Tom be for a bitch on heat!! Hold onto your balls Tom

I love these 750 word stories when they are as good as this one! Well done! This is my second reading. Just as good the second time.

This is one of the 750 word stories that packs more punch than many multi page blurbs.

Short, simple, great little story.

Very nicely done.

Whatever happened to this author? Seems to have last posted a decade ago.

great... kinda wanted more of that.

Let us feed on the destroyed bride a bit. Give an epilogue as she explains to Daddy

You have written many of my favorite stories ....this short one got five stars from me.... please keep writing and don't worry if the themes have been done. Write more often if you are able.

YEAH!!!!!!!!