All Comments on 'Punished By The Police Ch. 01'

I guess your learning curve went up on that one, some tops never experience bottoming in their lives and it sounds like thats where you were prior to your adventure.

Would be neat if it was even more graphic and desciptive...but good story.

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT, good story!!!!!!!!! mmmmmmmm

You know the story is hot when a straight woman can get this turned on.

This story was the best. I actually had a woody the whole time reading it. I also noted that the author wrote it using British English which made it all the more enjoyable for me as it is spicier and more flavourful than Yank English. Full marks to you lad!

really like that angle to a story, whether i'm writing one or reading one.

Nice job!

Great story, got me aroused almost immediately

any gay stories with very hairy arses, are hot, or any man.s arse, love big brawny and very hairy men straight or gay, older men are great 50 & on but hard to come by someday with luck thanks for a very hot storey hope to read more of your work

this story had me so hot and horny that i couldnt help but pull out my six and a half inch cock and beat off! I have never eaten my own cum before until i read this story. I came on my stomache and rubbed it in and then beat off again using my own cum as a lube until i shot again all over myself and then i scooped it all up and licked it off my hand and fingers. It was so good. I cant wait till i taste someone elses. I loved this story! Im a nineteen year old gay virgin from cincinnati, ohio.

As a testimony to the eroticism of this story, I got turned on almost instantly. And I am a 90% straight woman! Very sexy and well-written, and I do hope you write more!

-Adele

I am a 100% straight woman and your story has me so hot I'll have to wake up the husband!

Loved the story! Very hot. I wish I was being bent over right now!

Soooo HOT!!!!!!!!!

loved it