All Comments on 'Punishing Heather Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Nice simple

I liked your story, can't wait to read what happens next. With the girls. I'd love read in the end that she got pregnant by Josh.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Not bad

Before they started fucking her they should've used lots of different shit and paddled the fuck out of her

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Very good

Very good story. Where is the rest of it. It made my pussy very wet!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Thanks...

Thanks for not naming the black guy "Marcus." I enjoy interracial stories, but I don't like authors' that always use 'Marcus' or 'Bubba' as an synonym for a BBC.

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