All Comments on 'Punishment Day Festival Pt. 02'

Delicious.

Superb writing. I am a fan of judicial punishments in dystopian, but familiar settings, America or the UK, for example. Your writing takes me out of those familiar locales, but, (surprising to me ) ,keeps me engaged. The most alluring factor is the multitude of unique punishments employed. Chemical itching, sexual denial after deliberate arousal, and.......BIRDS ?????. Not your typical canings and paddlings, that's for certain. Please keep expanding on the back story of this society as well. You've got a newly committed reader under your spell !

@lecture I am working on additional stories! Thank you for the feedback!!

The mocking birds were unexpected and interesting. Hopefully we can get a first person perspective of a penitent at their mercy. Very intriguing!