All Comments on 'Punishment Day Festival'

This is a very professional piece of writing, comparable to A.N. Roquelaure or Aran Ashe. Creative, and engaging erotica of the finest quality. I look forward to reading more.

There is more coming!

That is a wonderfully evocative world, with punishments that are not excessively cruel but deliciously humiliating. I also love that you included both male and female submissives. I am very much looking forward to the other installments.

One small comment: "yolk" should be spelled "yoke" if it's not the yellow part of an egg ;-)

This is a really creative piece of writing. I enjoyed it greatly as you conjure up a fascinating and well-described world. Erotic as hell too. I look forward to much more. Thank you!