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HyakinthosTheoi over 6 years agoAuthor

To Siren_sea

Thank you for the feedback :)

Anonymousover 6 years ago

More!!!

Please keep going with this it’s hot

Anonymousover 6 years ago

thank you

I loved how you made pup sound so hot

Gybbs over 6 years ago

second time through

Having seen chapter 2 posted, I came back to 01, giving it a second shot ... and LOVED it. Thanks! Onwards!

zazrix9 over 6 years ago

Would I

ever luv to be anally raped in a public, not adult, bookstore. Making me hawt thing

Anonymousover 6 years ago

Totally Hot

I am hoping you publish many chapters. This is quite hot.

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I write erotica that brings me pleasure, and enjoy sharing my work. Comments and feedback are greatly appreciated. It's been a long time since I wrote it but I am still working on drafting Pup into a graphic novel or maybe a book. All updates will be posted here.

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