All Comments on 'Puppy-girl Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Excellent for a first story, more please!

twwinpeakstwwinpeaks11 months ago

I think for a first story this was very well done. Don't sell yourself short!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Really good, more!!

bambam4406bambam440611 months ago

this was really good. would love for it to be a series

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Really enjoyed this! I would love to see more

SugarDaddyDomSugarDaddyDom11 months ago

good girl. I expect more stories from you soon.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Love it and it was very well written Thank you. Please continue writing.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

more please this was so good

BgDaddy33BgDaddy337 months ago

Very good. Love the descriptions of Violet. Very hot and sexy.

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