All Comments on 'Puppy-girl Ch. 02'

Nicely done, your first attempts at a story are coming together quite well. This is hot, has a premise, and just the right amount of back and forth between Violet and Joel. Great start.

love the story keep them coming

Another great chapter. Really loving this so far

It is ok. He probably got what he deserved. Where is Sasha? No more chapters needed.

Damn, I really hope you add more chapters!!! Great story!!

Please continue this please

The sex scenes are very well done. Enjoyed those quite a bit. The non sex interactions jump from hot to cold making both seem a little bi-polar. The reactions all make sense in your story but the intensity sometimes interrupts the flow.

Joel needs more of a backstory to understand his reactions. His roommate, the bartender, are they important? They seem to just materialize and dematerialize mostly to berrate Joel. What is their history with Joel that gives them permission to speak to him with such familiarity? A few well placed sentences could fix that right up. 🙂 Feel free to DM me if you have any questions.

All in all I am enjoying your forray here and want to see where you take it. 5 stars.