Puppy Love Ch. 01

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"And look at these hands," Vaela purred, raising one of Bluebonnet's hands and stroking it delicately. "So soft. And these cute little callouses--what are these from, darling?"

"B-Burns," Bluebonnet squeaked. "From... from b-baking... over time..."

"Your hands are gorgeous," Vaela exclaimed, stroking along Bluebonnet's fingers. "They tell such a story! You have such delicacy, but you work so hard..."

Bluebonnet keened and shook her head weakly.

"Aw, what's the matter, pretty puppy?" Vaela purred. And Bluebonnet's heart came to a stop as the curvaceous beauty descended...

... and slipped right into Bluebonnet's lap.

Bluebonnet's whole world froze for a moment. She stared uncomprehending into two beautiful, pulsing pink orbs. She felt those hearts swirling in her own eyes, filling her vision with pretty pink bliss, painting the whole world around her in a sweet candy glow.

And nothing moreso than the radiant rosy-pink angel wriggling into place in Bluebonnet's lap and melting Bluebonnet's whole mind into sugary pink icing.

"What's the matter, pretty little puppy?" Vaela cooed, giving a bubbly giggle and playful wiggle. "Not used to compliments?"

"Nnn... no..." Bluebonnet squirmed helplessly beneath the curvy temptress, her eyes widening as her utter powerlessness began to truly sink in.

"I can stop, if you like." Vaela smirked, and her finger twirled in to boop Bluebonnet's nose. "It's gonna be awfully hard to contain myself, though~"

"I... I..." Bluebonnet stared into the rosy eyes. She was almost drooling, she realized, and self-consciously licked her lips. "I-It's, um... it's okay..." Gods, her voice sounded so distant and entranced right now.

Why did that turn her on so much?

"Aww, really?" Vaela beamed and bounced with glee. "I'm sorry, could you speak up just so I can be, like, totally sure?"

Bluebonnet whimpered. "I... I, um..."

Vaela leaned in close. Bluebonnet's breath caught as those plump, pouty pink lips brushed Bluebonnet's cheek softly. "Tell me you're sure, puppy girl. I wanna hear gorgeous little wispy voice of yours say it."

Bluebonnet moaned and whined and wriggled in helpless pleasure.

Bluebonnet moaned and whined and wriggled in helpless pleasure.

"Well?" Vaela was merciless, her voice dripping with adoring, affectionate delight and sending tingles up and down Bluebonnet's arching back, her fingertips gliding oh-so-delicately along her flushed face, her sides, her hips... "Speak up, puppy! Or are words getting a teensy bit..." She gave a wicked wriggle in Bluebonnet's lap, giggling. "... hard?"

A sound slipped from Bluebonnet's quivering lips. Not quite a word. Barely more than a whine, or a moan. She squirmed helplessly beneath the onslaught of delectable temptations.

"Hm?" Vaela puled back slightly, batting thick, dark eyelashes in a display of sugary-pink coquettish naivete. Her lips brushed ever-so-slightly against Bluebonnet's as she spoke. "What was that?"

"More," Bluebonnet whimpered, bucking, eyes wide. "Mmmmore!"

"I didn't quite hear that," Vaela teased. "Take a deeeep breath and try again~"

Bluebonnet obeyed without thinking. She breathed in deep, deep of the perfume, the pheromones, the mind-melting love potion filling the air, letting it fill her body, her mind, her heart... until everything around her seemed to be melting into sweet, sultry-pink honey.

"M-Mmmmore," the baker mewled, wiggling her hips needily.

"Oh, my!" Vaela giggled. "Did I hear you say you wanted more?" She leaned in, and Bluebonnet leaned back in the chair, sinking into pure, soft comfort as the breathtaking brunette squished her whole body against her to pin her there. "More praise?"

"Y-Yes!" Bluebonnet moaned, bobbing her head senselessly. "More! More, please!" Her eyes widened as she saw Vaela's smile grow. "Please! Oh, please, please, please praise me more, Vaela..."

"Really?" Vaela smiled slyly, tickling under Bluebonnet's chin. "More praise? Puppy likes being praised?"

"It--it fees so good..." Bluebonnet panted. Every time Vaela called her Puppy, she could feel her brains melting a little bit more, her whole mind turning to putty in Vaela's clutches. SHe didn't understand why. She didn't understand why the praise felt so, so unbearably wonderful, even though it made her blush and mewl and protest. It was so overwhelming.

It felt so addictive to be overwhelmed.

She breathed in deep and blushed and shyly squirmed and whispered, "More, please, Vaela. P-Pretty please? Puppy wants more praise!"

"But I thought you didn't like it," Vaela cooed. "I thought you didn't think you were a pretty girl! Which is soooo silly, because you're gorgeous, but..."

"i'm a pretty girl," Bluebonnet whispered under her breath, cringing as the words crossed her lips.

Vaela smiled. "Louder, puppy."

"I'm a pretty girl," Bluebonnet cried, squirming and thrashing. "I-I'm--please-please-please, please, Vaela, please, um, Miss, just--just pleeeease--"

And Vaela took her in a hungry, passionate kiss. Bluebonnet moaned and mewled and squirmed and melted into the sensation, letting Vaela's lips lock with hers--so soft, so sweet, pouring all that sticky-sweet yummy syrupy love right into Bluebonnet's open, yielding, malleable mind. She found her arms flying around Vaela, found herself returning the kiss, clumsily, eagerly, desperately.

The kiss felt like it went on into eternity, a sweet, oozing eternity of senseless adoration. There was plenty of time for Bluebonnet's mind to dissolve and melt and drip between her legs before Vaela at last pulled away with a giggle... and a wriggle. "Good girl!" she cooed.

Bluebonnet drooled. She moaned and squirmed happily. Her mind was a pleasurable haze of misty melty bliss now, and she stared without shame into Vaela's beautiful shimmering heart-eyes

Vaels tucked a finger under her chin, then, with a smirk, wiped away a little bit of drool, making Bluebonnet blush and whimper. "Gosh," she purred, "isn't my Puppy just the cuuuutest thing?" She reached up and started to scritch behind Bluebonnet's ears.

"Y-Yes, Vaela," Bluebonnet whimpered, too horny to even try to object anymore.

"My pretty Puppy."

"Y-Your... Puppy..."

Vaela's eyebrows arched.

Bluebonnet flushed. "Y-Your pretty Puppy, I-I mean."

"Aww, you train so easily!" Vaela beamed, and the scritches intensified, as if rewarding her pet. "Such a clever girl. But so silly to not see how gorgeous she is!"

"Y-Yes, Vaela," Bluebonnet whimpered. She squirmed desperately, feeling that needy feeling welling inside her as Vaela's hot body wiggled teasingly in her lap. "I.. I, uum..."

"Good thing she's such a good learner!" Vaela chipped, kissing Bluebonnet on the cheek. "We'll have her aaaall collared and ready to accept compliments in no time!"

Collared.

Trained.

Obedient.

"Yes, please, Vaela," Bluebonnet gasped, her whole vision swirling with pretty pink hearts with every breathe she took in, "pleeeease train me!"

"You're so cuuute when you're begging," Vaela cooed, the scritches and wriggles both intensifying as she planted an indulgent kiss on Bluebonnet's other cheek, then on her neck. "Your pretty eyes get sooo lovely and wide, and those luscious lips of yours... mmm..." Her lips smacked messily along Bluebonnet's neck, so soft, so sweet...

Bluebonnet whined and keened and squirmed at the exquisite feel of Vaela's lips on her needy, sensitive skin. "Y-Yes, Vaela," she squeaked, her whole world swirling with adoration for this gorgeous, angelic being. "Oh, yes... yes, please, m-more, mmmore, please..."

The praise was unbearable. It was delectable. It was addictive, and Bluebonnet needed more, even as she squirmed and blushed hotter with every word.

"Not to mention," Vaela purred in her ear, and Bluebonnet trembled with need as Vaela gave a mischievous grind of her hips that showed she knew exactly what she was doing to her Puppy, "that beautiful voice of yours, so sweet and wispy as it breaks like fog over a babbling brook~"

"Ooohhh..." Bluebonnet's head bobbed slowly, entranced, as the hearts spiraled around her head...

"And how cutely she takes commands," Vaela went on, kissing sweetly along Bluebonnet's jawline, "when she's looking at these!"

She giggled, pulling back, and bounced gleefully.

Bluebonnet moaned in desire as her eyes sank hopelessly downward once more.

"She'll be my good Puppy, now, won't she?" Vaela said silkily. "She loves to obey Vaela and her pretty boobies, doesn't she?"

Bluebonnet squirmed and mewled and nodded.

"What was that, pet?" A wicked little wriggle.

"Love... obeying..." Bluebonnet managed, her voice quivering with need as she watched the tits bounce, squish, jiggle... "Love... Vaela..." She flushed as the words escaped her. Nervousness tried to penetrate, but nothing could slip past the molten need she was drowning in...

"Awww!" Vaela sounded genuinely touched by this. She planted another kiss on Bluebonnet's cheek, this one very tender and gentle. "You're so sweet! And guess what, sweetie?"

Again, the hand guided Bluebonnet's head upwards.

Vaela's eyes shimmered. "I adored you the second your eyes met mine, Bluebonnet~"

Bluebonnet's eyes widened, and she let out a moan of pure, hopeless pleasure and desire, staring up worshipfully into the angel's eyes.

Then she felt a click around her neck, and a gentle, almost affectionate tug.

"Now, come along, Puppy!" Vaela cooed, hopping out of Bluebonnet's lap and waving the loop of a pretty pink leash in the air with a loving smirk.

Bluebonnet stared dumbly for a moment.

Then, with a tiny, almost involuntary whine, she slipped out of the chair and sank to her hands and knees. She wiggled her butt with excitement, the thrill of degradation joining the molten adoration pouring into her body right now, and gazed up at Vaela hopefully, expectantly.

"Good girl!" Vaela cooed, reaching down and petting Bluebonnet's hair. Bluebonnet moaned and whined and gave a happy, brainless bark. "There's my gorgeous pretty Puppy! Sooooo obedient and eager to please!"

Puppy nodded happily. She could barely think straight right now. The pleasure flooding her mind was beyond thought, beyond worry. It was pure, unadulterated, thick, sugary love.

She crawled after obediently as Vaela strutted over and behind the counter, watching Vaela's pretty ass sway, panting slightly and feeling even more syrupy bliss entering her with every breath.

"Now," Vaela purred, turning back to her happy little Puppy as her hand rested on the door to the back room, "are you ready, Puppy?"

Puppy's head bobbed brainlessly. She wriggled and squirmed, feeling so, so horny, and cocked her head slightly with a whine. Was she? What did her mistress, her owner, her angel, her true love want from her? Staring up at those pretty bouncing breasts and those gorgeous spiraling eyes, Puppy knew she'd give just about anything. Just about everything.

Seeing Puppy's confusion, Vaela reached down and scritched lightly beneath Puppy's chin. Puppy squeaked and raised her head and squirmed in delight.

"What I mean is," Vaela cooed, turning the doorknob and pushing the door open, "are you ready for your real obedience training to begin?"

Bluebonnet's eyes briefly widened.

More hearts flowed into them.

And she beamed and nodded and barked eagerly.

Vaela giggled and began leading Bluebonnet to the bedroom. "Gosh," she said sweetly, "you know, in hindsight, it's a good thing you don't sell jelly donuts." She patted Puppy on the head. "Looks like I found someone I can fill with soooo much more sugar~"

THE END

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Thanks so much for reading! I'm slowly getting back into a regular writing pace again, with a few hiccups here and there. Feedback and comments are always welcome!

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DragonLadDragonLad10 months ago

I wish so si much we had a glimpse at the real obedience training. Gosh where are these Fey looking to train humans as dumb pretty animals...

Archangel_MArchangel_Mover 1 year ago

m0ar plz! <3 <3 <3

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Glad to see my favorite author is still posting!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

So delighted your back! Loved the story!

Really enjoyed the way you made bluebonnets attitude shift over the course of the story, and I think you did a really good job of capturing what its like to be at a loss for words and frazzled in the moment.

If there was anything that disappointed me it was only that it ended so soon- very much looking forward to part two!

WolfblackthorneWolfblackthornealmost 3 years ago

It's good to see new stories from you.

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