All Comments on 'Pursuit of Happiness 02'

for updating so fast.

beautifully written and very descriptive as always.

I wonder if Lyssa will be able to communicate with Alpha Ross' dying wife.

*****

Great chapter as usual

Your story is confusing. Probably just my opinion, not a fact

really enjoyed your chapter looking forward to the next

nice update

@love4words, i hope you have read the previous story first? this is the sequel and everything in it made sense and wasn't confusing at all as long as you have read the other story.

Yes, you already have me confused. I think I know who the bad guy is, or do I. Could there be more than one? On how many side are Lyssa and Emmett going to be hit. I already see the plot thickening. I can't believe how excited I am about you sharing another one of your storys!

Bit of a low episode in terms of action (of any kind!) but that's OK, it sets up all sorts of interesting stuff.

Great, can't wait for the next one.

that you continued this series - i kind of felt berefit where you ended it but now i hope my questions all get answered in this next series - thanks, Kate

I like your characters but I'm not wild about your style - it is a little hard to follow sometimes. Still, interesting story so far!