by N8Dreams
A fabulous story, a real masterpiece!
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I laughed, I got hot in the middle, I cried at the end.
Would be a good stuff for a film.
I loved the way you had us waitng for Ariadne to get her way. The build up was great and I love your humour in the choice of names e.g. "Ropey Place". I can see that you have a lot of fun writing these stories. Lve Jamie
I loved the way you had us waitng for Ariadne to get her way. The build up was great and I love your humour in the choice of names e.g. "Ropey Place". I can see that you have a lot of fun writing these stories. Lve Jamie
I loved the way you had us waitng for Ariadne to get her way. The build up was great and I love your humour in the choice of names e.g. "Ropey Place". I can see that you have a lot of fun writing these stories. Lve Jamie
I loved the way you had us waitng for Ariadne to get her way. The build up was great and I love your humour in the choice of names e.g. "Ropey Place". I can see that you have a lot of fun writing these stories. Lve Jamie
I loved the way you had us waitng for Ariadne to get her way. The build up was great and I love your humour in the choice of names e.g. "Ropey Place". I can see that you have a lot of fun writing these stories. Lve Jamie
I loved the way you had us waitng for Ariadne to get her way. The build up was great and I love your humour in the choice of names e.g. "Ropey Place". I can see that you have a lot of fun writing these stories. Lve Jamie
I love the twist and the powerfully subtle ending. Well-written and emotionally affecting.