All Comments on 'QOS Creator'

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justvisiting56justvisiting56over 2 years ago

I hope there will be multiple parts added to continue this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great start. Like the set up story

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This is a great start. but needs to be finished.

JordanGloverJordanGloverover 2 years agoAuthor

Chapter 2 will be up soon. Thanks for the positive feedback!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story just needs more chapters

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Can't wait for chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Serious betrayal. What happens if Bob has an unfortunate accident? The bad guys get something they can rent out until they use her up. Very dark, but I also understand that it’s fiction too.

Thanks for sharing, Jackie.

chloelovesfurchloelovesfurover 1 year ago

Good start for me with this one. Just enough intrigue and story line to start. Skipped a bit at the beginning.

AmbulAmbul7 months ago

Great start!

MsVanilla69MsVanilla693 months ago

Nice start with the story but a bit of feeling uneasy , paid a lot of money and sent his wife out into the unknown I know its a story but cant help feeling on the edge of things that can happen or go wrong

redlion75redlion75about 1 month ago

He doesn't get to fuck his wife how or as much as he wants so he sent her to be a whore for other guys?fuck that and him he's a loser

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Story continues! Thanks for the positive feedback! The QOS Island series will be 11 parts. I've got plenty of other stories outlined, just need to flesh them out. How do you think about continuing the QOS series (making it a trilogy)? What other stories would you like to see?...

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