All Comments on 'Quality Check'

I really enjoyed this story.

It would be good if you could decide if it's "he" or "I"

Can't wait to see what happens in Monday

the comment about 1st or 3rd!!

Is it 'me/my' or 'he/him'?

One OR the other, NEVER both when there is only one person involved!!

Also, PROOF READ!!

Example - start of the second paragraph "Being at the bottom of the hierarchy, I'd been givin the task ...'

'givin'?

I liked the story the editing could have been better but keep writing

Thanks for the read.

Normally, this would be the exact kind of story I love, but the inconsistent perspective and spelling/grammatical errors were overwhelming to the point that I couldn't read it anymore. The constant switch from first-person to third-person perspective constantly jerks me out of the story.