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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Love the buildup! Keep writing. A few typos, but all good in general. Believable storyline also.

bogg99bogg99almost 3 years ago

Loved the mum’s seduction of her son via a couple bowls of popcorn. Extremely well and erotically described. I do hope there are sequels. Thank you.

sp9983sp9983almost 3 years ago

The ending was the best part.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

fantastic,, we need more of this couple

averagerich420averagerich420almost 3 years ago

Excellent story with great buildup.

Ode_de_cremOde_de_cremalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks everyone for the feedback! I do intend on continuing this story in the near future!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Awesome story loved the way it built up for a mother and son to finally having there first sexual act and loved the ending with I hope leads to more of this story! Gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Awesome 5 stars waiting on next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Loved it waiting for more 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

[guys] in at least one instance, perhaps more before I got bored, should have been [guy's] instead, if you knew anything about punctuation.

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Longtime reader, short time writer. I realize my writing has some work to do! Thanks all to comments and readership, it is much appreciated. Hoping to bring you all more works in the future, thanks for the look!

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