All Comments on 'Quantum Entanglement Pt. 02'

This is shaping up to be a good series, I don’t know if you’ve got a planned story arc you’re following or not, but please try and make the chapters a bit longer, we just get submerged in the characters and surroundings and the story stops. We know we’re reading for free, hence the feedback, it’s the only way to “pay” for what we’ve read, fwiw I’ve rated this 5⭐️ despite it stopping part way through a scene. Many thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz.

A bit brief. Did you forget to post the second page?

You do realize this is a porn site right? Two tiny chapters in and no action.

So now we wait for the Merge. Looking forward to the next installment. 5 stars. Keep them coming.

Ignore the jerks who can't wait for the juicy bits. Write at your own pace!

I can just feel that I'm gonna enjoy this. Short, sure, but high quality stuff. I don't mind too much if you don't make us wait for long in-between. 5*

Author, your giving us snapshots of your story. I highly recommend you get with it and give us readers several pages at a time that also don't in the middle of an episode. 4 stars but you'll lose me soon.

@Crusader235 right on