All Comments on 'Quaranteam - AU Ch. 02'

wow intense and heated, got to be hell on your system to go that extreme with viruses , miriam mentioned here is the same from Northwest story line?

Already looking forward to the next chapter. Great story within the quaranteam universe.

Miriam here is wife of "Zeke" and apparently mother of Talia.

Miriam of NW is single USAF Col and I suspect will end up on Harrison Black's "team".

Really like this as I do the other Quaranteam stories. Interested to see where this goes. Keep it up. Looking forward to the next chapter

Great entry into the Quaranteam universe! I've been wanting to see this from the Australian perspective since its been confirmed they were ground zero for the whole thing. This is a perfect minimum length as well...though I tend to like longer stories myself. Keep up the good work man, top notch!

Very strongly implied that the Miriam here is Miriam Becker, Talia's mother, thus, an Israeli citizen.

Connor's crazed public confession was a little too convenient.

Connor had a mental break down. Its the many reason why I don't question it. When people snap, they do crazy shit. Its more a question of how in the living fuck did he did ahold of that strain of DuoHulo or however you spell it. That's not something you get off the streets so this means he is connected to someone who is turning out this shit. So instead of hanging the fucker they are going to need to get him to talk.

Absolutely love this one. Keep up the great storytelling. Can't wait for more.

More please. Outstanding story.

Top work integrating the canon of the original into this part of the franchise. To have it so early and create a moment of jeopardy was great. I hope you continue to create characters of variable story arc utility rather than the temptation to have them part of a happily ever after utopia.

Enjoyed the story very much, look forward to how things develop.

i'm loving this story and can't wait for more

Good so far. I know you're the author and it's your story, but could you please have the women doing more than just thinking about when they'll get their next dose? I prefer stories where the women are more than just cum dumps for the man.

Great story thus far, looking forward to the next chapter. Hope it comes sooner than later

Scores a well deserved 5/5

Quaranteam worldwide. Great start!

Well done. Love the way you linked your story with CP's part of Quaranteam, Phil's tale re the attempted kidnapping of him by Australian operatives. Your story is excellent so please keep it coming.

Great addition to the quaranteam story line! Anxiously awaiting more chapters.

Great spin-off. Hope your feeling better. Get well soon. Looking forward to the next part!

I have a Quaranteam Jones. It needs feeding

Waiting...waiting!

"When they spent time together, she felt like was the centre of his universe."

-> Missing "she" before "was".

(Ask otterly who I am if you want additional pre-publication proof reading)

I enjoy the original (CP’s) but 2 chapters in and loving this more.