All Comments on 'QuaranTeam - Dave in Dallas Ch. 05'

Dave needing more than a dozen women eventually and already having 6 with one little girl, they need more room. Lupe's home next door should be combined with Dave's with the fencing between the properties torn down and her front gate either replaced or permanently locked. Also, building a connection between the two homes might be something Dave and his women will want to do as the household grows.

Also, you might want to store your character backgrounds and ideas for future chapters online either here on Literotica or in an online based email server.

First of all, I hope you recover all your work. I know how frustrating it can be and I always felt that what I had before was always better than what I rewrote.

I really enjoy the depth of your characters and the storybuilding. Your take on the QT universe is refreshing and I am eager to find out where you will take it.

Keep those chapters coming!

Excellent, excellent, excellent!!

Great chapter! Loved the character building through past anecdotes. Another great entre in the QT verse.

Thank you for your time and imagery, it's great! Please don't stop, your writing is wonderful. I hope all the QT writers keep expanding the universe of TBOTNW.

Excellent story. Sometimes might help to get a few more reminders of what folks look like imterspersed. Sometimes, its a lomg while in between readings and hard to remember to remember enogh to visualize.

Good luck with the tech issues. Usually the stuff you are missing is in there somewhere.

I skipped just about everything in this installment.

Good story. This and the others of this universe are fun reads. Few grammatical errors but easily read through

5. All your stories are great. Now off for a bit of time in the bunker.

Very nice, though one suggestion, don't include new characters in the cast list until the chapter after they are introduced. It spoils some of the story to get those details early like Melanie the roommate joining and the like, and as people mentioned in other comments, it really is better as a reminder than anything else.

@Zaralith. Oversight. I'm juggling two sites, two stories, and multiple chapters of each. I'm being careful, but not always enough.

Keep going I like your other story's as well. And these characters deserve to keep going to

I am jonesing. Nothing Quaranteam to read. Sure would like to see a new chapter.

held up in processing. they kicked once, and I resubmitted. should come through tonight, I think.

This story contains some of the best poetry I've heard lately embedded in it - the last line of chapter 5 is one of the better examples. I don't comment much, where anyone other than the author can see, but damn!

STAY SAFE

Typo: "round siler stud earrings"

Great chapter. Very real.

Took me awhile to get to reading it as for some reason I kept thinking it was the chapter before and thus I'd already read it. That was mybad.

The Janice/sitcom comments are hilarious.