All Comments on 'Quaranteam - North West Ch. 18'

damn cliff hangers....

I agree, damn cliffhangers!

No rest for them.

Excellent chapter. Erica is going to ruin his chance to go workout because he will be seen as ruining the safe space for the other women. None of the main characters have died recently in this world, and we haven't seen what happens with the center of a team dies in person, I'd hate to see that but it's an ever-present risk. And Harri, you can't be fucking around when your sperm is a weapon.

I read the Quarenteam stories by CorruptingPower, SilverRyden, OtterlyMindblowing, AgathonWrites, and of course you. I like all of them but yours is my favorite.

Please don't take long to publish the next chapter.

Damn cliffhangers aside, fantastic chapter. Perfect reset from the craziness in the last while setting up fo another wild ride in the next. Love your work, thanks for sharing!!!

Great series. The worst part is waiting for the next episode!

An extremely hot chapter which is even more than usual. I hate the cliffhangers but that’s only because I hate waiting for the next chapter and this makes it even harder to wait. Great job once again.

Loving it - more more more!! 😊

Dude. We're already going to read the next one. More cliffhangers is overkill.

Given the gaps between chapters, I would love a brief synopsis of the previous chapter at the beginning. The cast list was good, but there are several Quaranteam stories in development, so it’s hard to recall where each is after a few weeks.

Another great chapter, thank you!

These cliff hangers are fucking killing me!!!!

Another great chapter. I hadn't quite realized how emotionally attached I had gotten to your characters until I realized my eyes were a little misty after a quick sucker punch/hug between bros.

I can't wait to see which (if any) of the Valkyries gets added to Team Black.

I really, really appreciate the quick character biography at the beginning. It is so hard to keep track of all the characters in just YOUR works that I follow religiously for updates (This one, AMA and Magic Dick), let alone all the other Quaranteam authors. If you have a group chat with the other QTeam authors, I hope you share how much your readers say they appreciate it! It makes reading the scenes much more enjoyable when half my mind isn't trying to remember who Miriam (as an example) is.

One thing that is a little more common than earlier in Quaranteam stories, but needs to be universal, is the inclusion of a specific date on which a scene or story occurs. If the various authors are working off a master story outline created by CP, and they all take place in the same reality (even if in different physical regions or countries), then the audience would benefit by being able to place the story in context with those of other writers.

Excellent story. And others are starting to do the cast list which is a very good thing.

Well that was a hell of a cliff hanger! Well done another great installment. Keep it up!

Only note is the "I love you"'s are becoming a bit saturating.

This and FoF are great series. I hope Kara swiftwater joins the harem.

There was a fair amount of content, in the beginning of the story, on Harri's interaction with the tribe that has been missing in the last few chapters and I hope that is something that you will be getting back to soon with a positive outcome.

Well, shit. That was one hell of a cliffhanger. Great chapter and I'm looking forward to the next!

Great story! Absolutely enjoying it. Not so patiently waiting for the next chapter

Great story. Keep it up.

You are doing a great job with this story. Please keep it coming.

Good job as always. It would be great to deepen the work with the rest of the people in camp. You did that earlier, but it's dropped off the last few chapters.

Aw come on! hope I don't have to wait too long on this cliff hanger

Great story so far, looking forward to seeing what is happening with the camp next.

In terms of the vaccination/bonding process, would Josie have imprinted on Harri from swallowing a load of his semen? Or does she need sexual contact with one of the women who are vaccinated? Was that Erica's intent ("blowjobs don't count")?

Ye Gods!!!

Cannot wait until the next chapter comes along.

5/5

I surprised that Josie didn't imprint on Harrison from him cumming on her back and some getting in her mouth from kissing Erica as Vanessa imprinted on him in a similar way earlier in the series. I also glad that she wasn't vaccinated and attached to any man as that would have been fatal to her. I hoping that Spencer is okay and Abi is able to get to the bottom of the situation and make her feel better. I hoping that some or maybe all of the Valkyries camp is added to Harri's and Leo's camp or that they end up with great partners. I'm wondering if the attack on the camp is somehow related to the jailbreak that happened in the last chapter? Finally I'm hoping that in the next chapter that we get an update on Mary's status as I'm hoping that nothing bad has happened to her and her 2 children.

This has been a great series. Please don't stop now.

Really have enjoyed the story. Your an incredible writer!

I think I would like to see Miriam bring Niko Redwolf up for a day to address the Band and start to integrate them into the immunization protocols!

I'm still worried about the future. Why haven't anyone considered building the new mini-mansions / town in the old town place? Most of the town people are dead or gone somewhere else. It's the perfect solution to the problem of Harrison land. The government could either use Harrison land as Base or staging site for building the new town where the old town used to be.

This guy is supposed to be strong and resilient, with a strong will, but he is constantly apologizing and being ousted around. The internal character inconsistency is a bit annoying. Other than that, a very good story!