by jhealy55
I am looking forward to the next chapters of this story. Hopefully Melissa is on birth control so that their lovemaking will be as good as the build up has been.
Please do not take to long for chapter two. This is a great start of what could be a great story. Characters are well written and build up just right of two siblings growing up together with the right chemistry. Thanks
You are an excellent writer, the first chapter catches the attention of the reader. Nothing overt, it fleshes out the characters. I hope this is a long story, looking forward to it.
My sister always dried her bras in the dryer, on delicate, with no apparent damage.
I am also looking forward to the next chapter, this has the makings of a great read.
My brother always balled me during summer breaks. He always pleasured me nicely. Felt so good!
Good job setting the stage for what I hope is going to be a great series. Nicely written with appropriate pacing.