All Comments on 'Quarantine in Neverland Ch. 01'

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jsmangisjsmangisalmost 4 years ago
Excellent Start

I am looking forward to the next chapters of this story. Hopefully Melissa is on birth control so that their lovemaking will be as good as the build up has been.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Time

Please do not take to long for chapter two. This is a great start of what could be a great story. Characters are well written and build up just right of two siblings growing up together with the right chemistry. Thanks

wennbwennbalmost 4 years ago
I hope you will continue

You are an excellent writer, the first chapter catches the attention of the reader. Nothing overt, it fleshes out the characters. I hope this is a long story, looking forward to it.

My sister always dried her bras in the dryer, on delicate, with no apparent damage.

BrightBlue99BrightBlue99almost 4 years ago

I am also looking forward to the next chapter, this has the makings of a great read.

Rwa4768Rwa4768almost 4 years ago

Great start, I'm looking forward to reafimg more of this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Summer

My brother always balled me during summer breaks. He always pleasured me nicely. Felt so good!

ExperienceCountsExperienceCountsover 3 years ago
Nice Introduction

Good job setting the stage for what I hope is going to be a great series. Nicely written with appropriate pacing.

Skipper600Skipper600over 2 years ago

It's a good start, looking forward to seeing how it develops.

TxflgatorTxflgator2 months ago

Loved the story. Looking for a lot more too come

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Posted four very different stories this month based on the 750 Word Challenge. Please take the time to read (won't take long) and upvote if you enjoy them! Still working on some longer projects, which may/may not get placed here. Appreciate all the support you've given my s...

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