All Comments on 'Quarantine in Neverland Ch. 05'

So, the story is great. However the chapters are getting low reviews because there isn’t enough content. Chapters 1-5 and the next few chapters at this rate should have all been in the first chapter. Overall the story is great, it’s just progressing slowly.

Yes it’s slow going but that makes it all the more real there is an element that in the cave they can forget who they really are and explore great fantasy that’s true of people so good plot.

It will be interesting to see what happens when the fantasy clashes with reality and to keep writing it beyond the usual stop point that is most the story stop after intercourse happens but it will be interesting to develop it further beyond lockdown and back into normal life 👍🤞

Who cares what NO NAME thinks your length is great and if I wanted a book would get one

I really am pleased how you put the girls feeling into the story. There was no hurry to get there. I really hope you will keep on writing a lot more to follow this one. Go slow as you did this to the finish, When people want a fast build up the have no idea what the girl feels as embarrassment hits them or any lady.

This story is awesome and I love that you are taking time to show the emotions and feelings going through the young girls mind. Don't let anyone rush you I love the pace. Please continue the story for many more chapters.

I lost interest as soon as the author decided that "Brad" had an eight inch cock.

you manage to keep readers' interest and build-up the sexual tension nicely.

Still a really good sibling incest story. But, as one other commentator mentioned, why the 8in cock? It just spoils a story. I've no idea why authors think it's necessary to describe the size of man's cock especially why make them beyond the average size of the vast majority of men. The size of a characters cock doesn't make the story any better often it just spoils a believable story.