All Comments on 'Quarantine in Neverland Ch. 06'

This is one of the better stories I have read.. Please continue

Don't stop.

Give the sexy older brother a bit of sexy blond chest hair -- especially a treasure trail and a dusting across the pecs -- and a pubic bush of blond curls. This is a very sexy exchange and a good read. Keep it going!

Hope u add more chapters and keep it going. Awesome story. Putting it my new activity watch list. Thanks

Overall, this was a fun story. However, the dialogue did not feel authentic. For example, the liberal use “...and stuff” doesn’t feel consistent with college aged people. There is a very forced feel to the dialogue that holds all these stories back.

The idea that they used the cave to imagine a different person was clever, and I was hoping that would be further developed as a way for them to reduce shame associated with incest.

Nicely written, the story has a great mix of anticipation and erotic action.

Really glad that their relationship has moved out of the 'dare cave' and into the house.

I hope that their relationship develops beyond a sibling with benefits and into one of love. Like quite a few others on this website I like sibling incest stories to be one of love as well as sex. So hopefully they will fall in love with each other and this story won't end when the quarantine is over and their parents return.

Aside from a few, and I mean very few, grammatical errors, this story has great build and content. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Who’s. Doug? 😂really great build up of a story and can’t wait to see what happens in the make out closet/cave.