by yakboy69
Did part of the story not upload? It stops rather abruptly and there is no sign of the second chapter mentioned in the title. Otherwise looking forward to reading more.
If you look about halfway down you will see a small sentence saying chapter two. It should have been in bold but unfortunately hasn't shown up that way. There is definitely more to this story, I have submitted chapters three and four but it does take the moderators some time to get through them. If I upload the whole lot they get rejected so unfortunately, this is just the way I have to do it. I hope you stick with it though as there is plenty of action to come.
Enjoy. Yakboy69
I like your style of writing.....It certainly keeps one interested.
About to read chapter two but it is nice to see a fresh story up for a change. Will look for more if there is more to add to this..