by brucewayneegypt
Definitely worth the wait
This is the best in the series so far
Just keep them coming
I Am A Big Fan Of Your Work, and this is easily among the BEST. Really Enjoyed Part 4, and My Request To You is to publish Part 5 without a lot of delay.
Really loved the story. Very well written. It was lengthy but it kept me excited and entertained. Still loving the sacred but sexy bond between bhabhi and her devar. For every indian, bhabhi is like a mother figure and devar knows how to give her proper respect. Going to read again some of the sexy parts from this. Keep it up.
Was once a big admirer of your stories. Even wished I could Write like you. But ever since you stopped continuing some of your best series, I had not been enjoying your stories.
I was very surprised to see Part 4 of Manisha Bhabhi online and I am more surprised to know you still have it in you. This is the best story I have read in the last many months and how you have connected each situation and characters is just outstanding.
Hope to see more like this soon.
This is easily the most exciting and biggest update ever from you, but there is still a problem. You still have not learned how to WRITE A STORY. This is perfect as a SCREENPLAY. I have been easily able to Play this out in my mind like a movie, but there was just no pleasure in READING This.
Very good stuff, bruce. This is a very big story but you have written it very well. It is understandable that you have taken a lot of time to write this and the result is excellent. Please upload the next part as soon as it is ready.
I waited so long for this and honestly I thought I will never get to read this
please please please post next part soon
This is your best work ever. Really enjoyed how you have detailed each event.
Dear brucewayneegypt
I strongly feel you have a future working in movies.
You really have the talent to write engaging stories and this is a superb effort.
Waiting for more such masterpieces.
NEVER BEEN SO EXCITED FOR AN EROTIC STORY BEFORE - THIS SERIES IS JUST TOO AMAZING
5/5
I had waited so long for this and this is totally worth the wait
Please post the next parts quickly
I have been waiting for the 5th part for the past few months, but looks like the author has forgot his id or something.