by flashgordon562006
Love the quarantine relating to the current times. Love to read more. However need more depth. There are quite a number of opportunities which could be venture into further. Keep it up.
Felt kind of bland to me. If you're going to make a short story like that then the focus and the detail needs to go into the sex.
to fast, nobody was reluctant at all. The dream was just a bad writing device....
Quick and entertaining with rationalizations providing fodder for more.
BTW , your clothing is likely adorning the family of the driver that was given them to deliver, and didn't.
This was a good start but needs embellishment and another chapter at least
I don't know, I'm no critic, but I was erect throughout most of this story. Thought it was great.
Yes good story and probably true in many cases. What else is there to do in quarantine
I usually don't suggest that story be longer or have a sequel. But in this case, I agree with some of the other commentators. After this, the three of them can have sex as much as they want, but some oral sex should be introduced. All three should learn how to pleasure the others orally as well as genitally.