All Comments on 'Quarantined with Mom & Sis'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Ok, maybe part 2? Get them both pregnant.

FHASFHASover 2 years ago

Love the quarantine relating to the current times. Love to read more. However need more depth. There are quite a number of opportunities which could be venture into further. Keep it up.

FnarfFnarfover 2 years ago

Over a bit too quick, but good otherwise

Phoenix_LusterPhoenix_Lusterover 2 years ago

Felt kind of bland to me. If you're going to make a short story like that then the focus and the detail needs to go into the sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

to fast, nobody was reluctant at all. The dream was just a bad writing device....

tizwickytizwickyover 2 years ago

Hit all the right notes but was Very rushed and much too short.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Quick and entertaining with rationalizations providing fodder for more.

BTW , your clothing is likely adorning the family of the driver that was given them to deliver, and didn't.

fisheronefisheroneover 2 years ago

Needs another chapter great beginning and missing conclusion

lovedefactolovedefactoover 2 years ago

This was a good start but needs embellishment and another chapter at least

gtmm49684gtmm49684about 2 years ago

I don't know, I'm no critic, but I was erect throughout most of this story. Thought it was great.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Yes good story and probably true in many cases. What else is there to do in quarantine

RodThrustinRodThrustinover 1 year ago

I usually don't suggest that story be longer or have a sequel. But in this case, I agree with some of the other commentators. After this, the three of them can have sex as much as they want, but some oral sex should be introduced. All three should learn how to pleasure the others orally as well as genitally.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Oh man, this needs to continue, please.

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