All Comments on 'Quarantined with my Mother - Week 01'

So many spelling errors couldn't get thru the first paragraph

These stories are absurd. What moms actually behave this way?

Desperately needs an editor. And who is Susan? Runs a 100 years? etc

I absolutely loved it.......

There's a very sexy story hidden in that mass/mess of careless mistakes.

Get someone whose native language is English to check it before you post.

you rushed the ending, you were starting to go the way of two women kissing, or the two moms fucking their sons, and it ended with what they were doing at home, bad ending...

Desperately needs a Grammarly application.

"She was not naked, but rather she turned her one-piece thong into a topless bottom." WTH does this mean?

Yes, great story. But who is Susan? One comment about the relationships: it sounds like there might be some girl on girl sex coming up. I hope the boys also enjoy each other, at least suck each other’s dicks.

of course Mom's don'tactthis way.....that's the attraction of stories likethis. The fantasy. But, please do GET AN EDITOR. Too many errors. It's very distracting.

A good story that builds slowly, a bit frustratingly, depicting the hesitation of the two primary characters as they give iI to desire. Looks like a good series on the way.

Way too many spelling errors and typos

What a waste. Absolute SHIT. You have no polish and no spelling or grammar capacity. I am fully aware many of the writers here are not native English speakers. However, their trace evidence of such is obvious will yours is just plane careless and lazy. Name change because you can't even keep track of the central character's name. Idiotic perspective mistakes. All this ads up to a shitty story which is unreadable.

Erotic, but spelling errors really suck. There is no Susan.

Please continue, but yes you need a proof reader,

This story comes off as a parent taking advantage of a mentally deficient offspring...

great start

Please continue the story!!