by bluedragonauthor
Great story the anal action was very very hot, it was too hot for me not take care of my morning wood. This was a timely morning read for me, I just hope this story continues. Great job!
Wow, I've been reading Literotica for years, and just created an account just to say: What an AWESOME series, and what a spectacular ending. And you are one of the few author's that doesn't butcher the English language and can spell. Thanks again. Live long and write often.
Still doing a great job! I'm excited to see where his relationship with Michelle ends up. You make it clear she is still deeply "in love" with her brother. Maybe they go away to college together and share an apartment? Will Alex ever fall into the "in love" stage without realizing it? Lots of possibilities! Again, great balance of sex and the relationship side. I would like to hear more what's actually going through the sisters heads... 5*
I agree with the comments the way you write this story shows your invested and few authors on this site are there is a difference between writing hot story and a exllent hot story you are at the latter of the two an I love the story I too would like to see where the story goes from here so please keep it up coz you have a life long fan here. Also it nice to read a story with the correct spelling not have my primary language but herd. 5 stars again
I have loved this story, realistic and erotic, you are a great story-teller,well done
I loved the sex, but had doubts about the 'love' angle; for me, the story felt less comfortable in that respect. Whilst being all in favour of sibling-screwing, the idea that they might settle down together and make babies fills me with foreboding: we already have too many in-bred knuckleskulls in this world. ;o(
Good to have you back.
Best Damn author on the site.
Read the Billionaire series years ago,
Have popped back a few times since just
To check if you'd posted again.
5*
The sex is overdone. The first two chapters of this story were the best, all downhill from there.
it would be hot if you add in a few more chapters, add some drama and all that mushy stuff, one sister gets pregnant or both sisters, or the mom joins in or whatever you're the writer. It just doesn't feel right to end it like this
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So glad you are back!!!!!!!!
Love the whole thing! First series I've read from you and I can't wait to go read through some more. Was wondering if there were any plans to continue this series, because I love these three siblings!
Loved the whole series. Any plans to continue this at some point? I'd love to see how things progress with these characters
I enjoyed this story, though a few times it seemed to get wordy but I could not stop reading. 5*
I mean, if Alex hadn't treated him like shit she would have had that ass fucking sooner so she can hardly complain. He shoudl have drawn it out longer and teased her more to be honest. She deserved to be made to beg and apologize. She may have apologized for bringing up reality but she never did for snubbing him or locking him out. >.> That ass fucking was damn hot though. And Michelles was both hot and rather wholesome. Their love seems so pure <3 Plus the way she actually came back after waking up and cuddled with him and made love to him after apologizing, she is so sweet :3
Chapter five ruined it for me and there was no satisfying resolution to that drama in chapter six, rushed ending maybe.
Should have Told Alex keep fucking herself. Using Michelle to get at him. Then rubbing it in that she get her ass first. Demand an apology. Then told Michelle if she goes along with the hateful shit again she can stay in Alex’s room. Girls want to fuck great but doing it for spite just to hurt him hell no.
Really? You took the time to write of him locked out and having feelings over it. Then you gloss over it all. If you tired of writing this story shouldn’t have made it so long. He should have told them both he didn’t deserve that. After everything he has done to make them happy they both treat him that way. Michelle going along with it would have got her nice send off when she came to my bed. Go back to Alex we will try this again in the morning.
Really this is how it ends? Back and forth on do they stay together. That bastard brother never even tried to imagine the life Michelle wants. He just telling girl what she wanted to hear. Poor girl telling him she be ok when he leaves her and not a damn word from him other wise. Such a waste of time on this.
Love the story. First one of yours that I read. Will read the others. Not sure what some commenters expect - when they complain about how it ends. That is where your own imagination comes into play. If you want to envision them getting married, having a 14-family-member dogpile of an orgy, having in-bred children, that is on you. I, for one, can appreciate that every story ends at some point. You develop the characters well and, since I apparently have an attention span longer than a 3-year-old, appreciate feeling like you carefully took the time to introduce a little 'reality' into characters grappling with the concept of committing incest. I find stories that are short on character development and all about porn-star physical attributes and nymphomaniac sex drives to be boring. 5* throughout.
One anonymous person said, "I find stories that are short on character development and all about porn-star physical attributes and nymphomaniac sex drives to be boring." I have to agree with that 150%. I know that you're probably going to end this story right here, but I really and truly don't want you to. I've really enjoyed this immensely and want a bit more. Excellent job.
Seeing how I can’t really find the words to adequately describe how I feel about this, I’ll just tell you what happened. Picture an old guy sitting in a dark dining room with only the illumination of his I-pad for light. He finally finishes reading, looks at the time up in the corner of his i-pad and
Says :holy shit! It is 4:03 in the morning! THATS how great this story was!!
I enjoyed this story and wished you continued it. I lost some interest when you seem to have killed any romantic developments between the younger siblings. It just became another fuck story. I wished you had taken it to some future between the siblings. I have a hard time believing after experiencing all that physical relationship that they are ok letting the other move on from them. Still a good series just hoped for better outcome
Awesome story all the way through. Hope to see more and either a conclusion (or long lasting solution) to the Michelle situation.
Cheers
I enjoyed this story, and would very much like to see a conclusion to it. It would be great to see them figure something out that makes the relationships work long term.
This is a great series. Like others, a little bummed that we were left wondering what happens to them in the future, but I guess that is for our imaginations. Great work!
Ok, it's reasonable to assume that none of them will continue in these relationships, society being what it is...
And I really don't think that Alex's "crazy in love" with guys during her teens really compares to being in love with your brother, a person you've known for years and years.. shame to see a serious love fade if it was...
Dang! Such a wonderfully positive story! There are so many “authors“ here that need lessons from you. No joke. You kept this whole thing positive from the first word to the last. No unwanted pregnancies, emotional trauma, nor anything else of a serious negative bent.
It is all about siblings sharing good feelings and intimate pleasures with each other.
TO CELEXS. and others. TRUE STORY. There used to be a brother and sister about half a mile from me that had lived together their entire lives. WHAT YOU SAID YOU WERE HOPING FOR HAS HAPPENED IN THE REAL WORLD! IT CAN HAPPEN TO THESE TWO AS WELL.
No, they never had children, which was probably wise. I think now days there are all kinds of tests that could be done to accurately estimate the probability zof having a child with no “issues “,because of the parents close relation. Regarding the local pair, I was told people let them be, they acted like any other couple in public. Not showing off etc. just another couple People that knew one or both for some time said they fell in love with each other and never outgrew it. The love was genuine , so people respected that and the fact they didn’t draw attention to their “situation. He was protective of her. I started talking with the lady one time at the bowling center where we both bowled. (different leagues, just same night). After a fair amount of time, Hank (the brother) came over and said “Okay, I’ve been very patient, but your time with her is up.” Old Al was not a small guy and I had no doubt in my mind anyway, that I could make short work of him IF he pressed the matter. Anyway, I looked at Leah, the sister, she smiled and says Hank is very protective, he doesn’t mean anything by it. I emphasize, We were talking mostly about bowling, and nothing about anything that he should have objected to if he had bothered to listen. I just said Ok, Hank. Leah try that hand position on your ball and see if it helps.” and I went back to my own lanes. And other than a wave when I saw him at their mail box, I never had a talk other than general greetings again. She died first, then he did. They were probably a good 15-20 years older than me. But, sibling love does work!!
I really would have liked to know if they had some rough spots along the road of life, but that’s not something I felt comfortable going around asking people that knew them.
Just another great story from the best author I know.
Doesn't have the same depth of character development or emotional rollercoasters as some of his previous stories, but then again, the author mentioned in the preface that it wasn't meant as such. It was, however, as hot as it was meant to be!
Bluedragonauthor: thanks for sharing!!
Nuh. What an idiot he is. Allowing himself to be dragged around by his cock to help two manipulating bitches fulfill their crazy lusts.
This story started good but the last two chapters went totally against everything that was being built up from the first 4 chapters and really ruined a good story.
Sadly I cannot take back the 5 stars I gave for the Chapters 2,3 and 4.
Well this is more like a story that has a chance of happening and it is very well written. An epilogue after maybe Michelle leaves college or so would've been nice too. All in all, wonderful story.
Holy shit that was hot....wish this thing was around when I was younger....would have three women to please...mom and two sisters.....booty call step dad could stay with his other booty call....sadly we were not afraid as we ate now...never did get to fuck any of them
This is one of the best stories I have read on this site, and I have been here a long time. The right amount of buildup, plot, sex, and kink. I salute you.
Like an electrocuted trout on the deck. Sometimes these stories are the funniest things I've read/heard in years.😂😂😂
Great story.
I agree would be nice to know how things went after the brother and sister whent back to school in person. Very good story and hot as hell
You left it open and left us the readers hanging how did it end did they keep having sex with each other after the lock down or what
An excellent story from start to finish, these three characters have become very real due to your beautiful characterisation of each of them.
Thank you for publishing this excellent work here.
You have easily become one of the best writers I've ever discovered on this site. Never thought I'd say this, but something good actually came from Covid. This piece wouldn't exist without it.
This is your best story so far (I'm reading them in alphabetical order). 'A different kind of family' was good, too. I think that what they have in common are better-developed characters. In some of your other stories, it's often just a pile of bodies, or one-dimensional characters. But the sisters here are easy to tell apart, and a little reluctance on the part of Michelle goes a long way to helping the story move forward. Well done.
BDA, you need to come back to this story and let us know where things stand post lock down. Did Chelle move on? Or is she still fully in love with her big brother? And how about Alex? Is she getting it still from her brother despite being a relationship with someone outside of her bloodline? THATS when it gets interesting!! Come on, man!
When lex locked the door, she copped N unjustified attitude. He needed to hit her with a burst of testosterone the next day.
"You will lock me out with your chicken-shit attitude *exactly* one more time. From then on, your steady date will be your dildo. You might want to have a chat with Chelle before you think she'll fill in with that strap-on. I still love you, but you can pack that attitude away".
No baby brother would accept her bullying at the age of 22.
Enjoying the series, glad we’re on a good note, but would like to more on these siblings.
Loved it, hoping the best of them lived in the a cabin at the end because they was kicked out as the parents found out that
1). they was pregnant and were having his kids or
2). They decided to get there own place (a cabin) to bring up there kids (but they never told the parents who the father was),
Great story, but with a few stories like this, in the end everyone doesn't stay together, for once, I'd like the siblings stay together and hoping one or two of the sisters or cousins or family members get pregnant and stay together permanently.
Great way to endure CiVIC lockdown. Well told, sex was innovative and HOT. Love the characters personalities shining throu.gh.
Thank you for publishing this EXCELLENT work here, it has been a pleasure to read this story for a second time. Over the past couple of reading sessions I have been pleased to meet your great characters and become involved in their various escapades.