by Dinsmore
such a sad ending. i liked how it showed that every sad ending has a happy beginning, though.
Once again you show how people can overcome the past and succeed. Great story about growing up. I almost wish there was a sequel but doubt if ones in the works. Thank You for another romantic story.
I was reading slowly, enjoying it ....... and all of a sudden, some French phrase and the story just stopped? ............. What the hell was that? .... Shouldn't stop a story so abruptly like that, when you've just tunneled another story-line......... If you're gonna stop, do it right after the older French tutor left for NY! Can't stop when you've just introduced another French woman! What kind of a writer are you> Hmmmmmpt!!
Ça m'a donné des frissons. Quant à moi, mon age est quatre-vingt six.
Nouveau veuf après soixant'années heureuses.
i really like reading the story. i hope there is a sequel. very nicely written.
Thanks for a good one, sorry for the french title, from a Hungarian too!
I do hope there will be a sequel the beginning _are_ there!
John
I enjoyed the nice strady flow and general tenderness of the story. Felt good when I finished reading it. While it had sex, it was not a "sex" story.
This author writes in a very high quality style. It is very professionally sounding and reads smoothly from line to paragraph. Keep up the excellent quality writing and I hope to read many more with some professionally offered.
OMG you have to continue this!!!!!!!!!!
This would be a fantastic story even without the sex.
Please, we beg you, continue the story!
A lovely, tender tale, with a sad parting; & the promise of a new relationship.
The comments entitiled "Quant à Moi" deserve an English translation. (permit me to be officious, please.)
"As for me";
"The story gave me shivers. As for me, I am 86 years old. Newly widowed, after 60 happy years."
Madam; I wish you many more happy years.
Dan.
This is simply a perfect love story. The sex is hotter than the kitchen stove, beautifully written about two delicious people. The setup is prepared very expertly -- Five-star rating is not high enough. Each needy soul smoothes out the emotional scars of the other with total generosity. And that, friends, combined with supersensuous romps in bed, makes for true love. This first amatory adventure has its natural limits. But it sets up both him and her to move on into happy and passionate lives. Now let's hear about Michelle and Steve. I love this gloriously crafted tale!
I'd have given this story more than five stars, had there been more stars to give. It was an excellent "first time" story -- most of which are pretty trite. Beyond that, it was romantic and had a nice twist at the end. I'd like to hear how Steve and his new-found French friend continued their relationship in other stories. Thanks again.
Fine writing. Sexy, round characters, human situations and behavior, nice "deja vu" twist at the end.
with a perfect ending. My hat is off to one of the masters of contemporary English literature, if not quite yet in French. Bonne nuit.
An excellent take on a very challenging set of circumstances - for all of them
Wonderful story of first a first encounter, and a love story between Steven and Michelle would make it complete. 5 stars