All Comments on 'Questioning'

A wonderful first submission!

You did a great job building up the story and while the transition (Do you want to make out) felt a little contrieved without Annie's POV showing she was intrigured r at least aware of where it might lead, what followed was a wonderfully charming first encounter for the lovers.

I'd love to see the next chapter.

This was a nice start. I'd love to see where things lead between these two roommates.

~ L

Such a nice first story and depiction of sexual exploration. Would love to see where these roomies take it to from here

I'm usually a pretty good judge of whether or not a story needs more. This one does. You've created two potentially lovely characters here and it would be very interesting to see where they go. Think about it...

of discovery and realization where finding out the answers is half the fun.

I loved this simple and yet so erotic story. For me it was a 5 star. There was no false angst, no pseudo-psychology just a tale told well. I have women friends who describe similar experimentation at uni and it going well for some and lousily for others. So I thought it was close to truth, which often makes the best fiction anyway.