by EldritchSandwich
I loved this simple and yet so erotic story. For me it was a 5 star. There was no false angst, no pseudo-psychology just a tale told well. I have women friends who describe similar experimentation at uni and it going well for some and lousily for others. So I thought it was close to truth, which often makes the best fiction anyway.
of discovery and realization where finding out the answers is half the fun.
I'm usually a pretty good judge of whether or not a story needs more. This one does. You've created two potentially lovely characters here and it would be very interesting to see where they go. Think about it...
Such a nice first story and depiction of sexual exploration. Would love to see where these roomies take it to from here
This was a nice start. I'd love to see where things lead between these two roommates.
~ L
A wonderful first submission!
You did a great job building up the story and while the transition (Do you want to make out) felt a little contrieved without Annie's POV showing she was intrigured r at least aware of where it might lead, what followed was a wonderfully charming first encounter for the lovers.
I'd love to see the next chapter.