All Comments on 'Questions'

Thought the backstory was rushed. Not enough description about the relationship between Lynn and her brother. Didn't even get the brothers name in the story, unless I missed it.

Would have been useful to know why their relationship suddenly developed into a sexual one. What had driven Lynn to go for role playing with her brother. Perhaps we'll get that in the next chapter.

Having said that I really like the writing style and the story line. Looking forward to the next chapter.

5 star though.

It’s a good thing that he forgot about birth control, because grandmother wants grand babies. Let’s see her get pregnant now with her brother’s baby.

Still the one I read b4 by a different writer, it was too long and the 2nd half made little sense. Leaving readers wanting more is probably better.

Yeah, me too, 5*! Some spelling mistakes and words added or missing but didn't deter from the story. Keep up the story please.

Hopefully, he likes to watch threesome porn.

I don't care what anyone else says, It was a 5. PLEASE continue.

douche

descent not dissent

read it on the train home so had to wait to sine in place my score and to ask for more

It could've been better. Spelling needs watching and the characters need a little more polish. Overall not great, but not terrible either. A solid 3 stars. You have potential, please grace us with more.

Wish i had a sister like that, my 5 are all stuck up bitches !!

Five stars

Very nice and hot. I'm moving on to parts two.

I have read this story before on literotica, is this a repost?

Throwing a hotdog down the hallway. Hahaha!

Some erratic spelling here and there, but, overall, not too bad,.

Needs an editor, but it's hard to hold that against you, this was fun!

Loved a role play by the sister...

4 stars

Nice, but I personally like the Chocolate Chip cookies . . . .